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Category: Madden Girl

Cries Tears of Emerald

Rolling rolling rolling out the door
Madden girl goes again today

She just wants to drown the world
In shards of cool emerald glass
With creamy oranges and cloudy yellows
Like the smooth marble, cool to the touch in museums and fancy French restaurants

All the bouncy people
That bounce around town
Carry boom boxes in purses

Or tie them to the lamp posts
Lining the streets so fashionably

They boom
Dubstep bumps with electro neon,
And strap on stripes to match their hearts.
But in the cooler places, the shiny brass melts
All over sidewalks

And makes it hard to walk

Pushing and trudging through thick, golden molasses goo,
These are madden girls worries,
her shedded tears,
regrets and insecurities,
her wants and obstacles,
things she tried but gave up on
Gave up on things

like herself, especially

But still,
When the wading is done, she continues on
Determined, not defeated yet
Definitely not

And she can finally rest, for she has met an old friend
The magenta sea urchin

In the deep, jazzy, blue, the octopus plays
The snazzy slow music,
Fit for queens
The queen of hearts!
Make way! Chins up!
Look lively for her highness and Alice.

And behind Alice, madden girl waits
For her correct time and place,
To strike
And devour
And enjoy,
savoring the sweet, satisfying

worth the wait taste

of victory


The new girl, the Madden Girl

I am adding a new series that it’s necessarily a series. Madden girl is going to be mostly more vague than the other stories I have here. The Madden Girl series I think will en up being reflections of my own feeling and emotions base in what is happening in my life. I’m guessing it will mostly consist of drabbles (short, more vague, mindless pieces, with little or no solid theme, scene or dialogue, usually about either love or problems), poetry, and random emo angsty mindless stuff called EXPRESSION. I might even do a drabble about cake or fire or ponies or even pine cones……….maybe…..
Anyway, look forward too it! Keep checking up on WordPress more often, because I have more free time now to update more often. I’ve found it easier to type on the bus to and from school and then update when I get home. I look forward to starting this new installment!

Madden Girl

Madden Girl wore red and black plaid skirts

and black boots with blue socks to match

her green foamy eyes

like glass pawns that glow and melt in the sun
Madden Girl felt that way sometimes
she didn’t remember how to make it
or worse

and she kicked off her boots at the door
and danced joyful and in tears
trying her best

but she didn’t know how
even with everyone around her to help
she tried to do what he saw as


she was normal
not tired
no, gentle, very fragile
so fragile

and so she
left, the party and the people
and city
for her high vanilla clouds and creamy orange sky above
where her dreams played it cool

with strawberry pies and peach perfume
growing in hollowed apples sour as the
[like alcohol stings in a cut]
Madden Girl was

but Madden Girl still wanted more
she kept higher and broke
harder this time than before

and she tried not to cry this time
but her shoulders quivered
and Madden Girl let the salt ocean
roll and sparkle and dance down her cheeks
hollow cheeks
wishing, whispering to be held
too quietly

Madden Girl kept searching,
frustrated more this time

trudging through dealt and tomato soul. forks and sunflowers, stripes and nail-polish

Madden Girl didn’t
Madden Girl had any friends, but
she pretended for
Madden Girls sake

and the isolation
pained her
like cold burning in her fired numb arms, that traveled through her, pulsing, making her chest hurt

Madden Girl made things bad
“I make things bad.”
Madden Girl make things better
“Madden Girl can’t make things better.”
Madden Girl can’t?
“Madden Girl can do it.”
No. Madden Girl can’t make things better
“Madden Girl will!”
“Madden Girl will succeed!”
watch Madden Girl…
watch Madden Girl go…

as her emerald jewels closed to the world
they opened
to a new
world, and they made her see
there was more

but Madden Girl was too late to
close the garden gate
was too creaky
when Madden Girl escaped
she forgot to leave her
behind in her dark room
where she truly was blind
with only the coldness

and the Madness
Madden Girl
that became
Madden Girl
that is
Madden Girl

Madden Girl’s fury was slashed and raked Cross walls and rooms
not canvas
only in red
not blue
or green
only red, her color
The color of Madden Girl



Serena, don’t rant about copyright infringment regarding the beatles ;)